there was a discussion in seminar of the sudden shifts to the "posterized" page-spread images at 5, 7, 9 and 11 above. people thought the transitions should be more subtle, softer. the alteration 4/5, 6/7, 8/9, 10/11 was jarring. better to bring the posterized together, with a soft introduction possibly involving 10 as the transition spread. then, at end, return to the dreamy, softer tone of the earlier page spreads.
there was a discussion in seminar of the sudden shifts to the "posterized" page-spread images at 5, 7, 9 and 11 above.
ReplyDeletepeople thought the transitions should be more subtle, softer.
the alteration 4/5, 6/7, 8/9, 10/11 was jarring. better to bring the posterized together, with a soft introduction possibly involving 10 as the transition spread.
then, at end, return to the dreamy, softer tone of the earlier page spreads.